There is a certain click-
of sneakiness
The-Oh-so-slow
and careful turning of a latch
When you are young
and want to know!
What is on the bed,
or in the desk-
I loved to tiptoe
over creaky farm house floors,
(these were grey in uptairs halls)
and walk the certain edge of steps
to attic rooms
in breathless heat;
to kneel and peer beneath
the fringe of iron bedstead
then held my breath
as painted candy box
was lifted so as not to scrape
carefully both thumbs
pried up the lid
to view treasures
laid within bright walls of gold
18 comments:
Oh, for such childhood dreams! LOL
Delightful memory!
I can feel the excitement, great write.
Childhood curiosity rewarded!
I remember doing that! Very visual nicely done!
The golden years of childhood
Sharply deft; well written...
smiles...def sounds like some mischief i might get in as a kid...peeking into places that have locks to see what treasure i might find...smiles.
Your poem evokes anticipation and memories of halcyon days. Thank you for sharing and taking me there, Izzy.
You resurrected memories from my long ago I had completely buried ... what a treasure ~ your poem.
Our farm house was "the original" house in the tornado of "Wizzard of Oz"...and at least a thousand times I sneaked up to the attic, and I did..."walk the certain edge of steps to attic rooms
in breathless heat;
to kneel and peer beneath..."
Hey, I really like the words you "put in my mouth" (I'm pretending I said them.) LOL!
Awakened childhood memories - beautifully described.
Excellent. I took every step with the inquisitive child.
Great adventure of youthful discovery...beautiful!
you've taken me back to some amazing memories exploring my gran's home. she kept so much stuff and every drawer and cupboard was an exploration into excitement, wonderful
Wonderful - you took me on this fine adventure.
Anna :o]
This such a charming poem I loved exploring and mysteries when I was a kid too
This one was nostalgic for me...reminded me of my grandma's house, which was filled with many lovely secrets.
=)
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