Conversing: Mag 177 Sudden Awe

Sunday, July 14, 2013

Mag 177 Sudden Awe

photo by Agustin Berrocal

Oh the grip of excitement rising!
A finder of ingots laid out before him

He had never seen it in such abundance
his mind and emotions had him reach for it

before his body could warn him
it might be molten hot-

14 comments:

Brian Miller said...: and greed takes yet another life...

smiles.; July 14, 2013 at 10:05 AM
Gail said...: Hot verse; July 14, 2013 at 11:23 AM
Other Mary said...: Good take on the prompt.; July 14, 2013 at 11:34 AM
Berowne said...: Sharp and judicious; well done.; July 14, 2013 at 2:16 PM
Kathe W. said...: be careful what you reach for! Nicely done!; July 14, 2013 at 5:41 PM
Susan Lindquist said...: ... so many ways to take this ... young enthusiasm? awe? greed? naivete? Or ... just a hottie getting hotter?

Love it!; July 14, 2013 at 8:18 PM
21 Wits said...: I think the steam has reached me! Great Magpie seasoned with wit!; July 14, 2013 at 11:13 PM
Jinksy said...: I think I must have been on your wavelength this week! lol; July 15, 2013 at 3:46 PM
Helena said...: When you gotta lunge, you gotta lunge!!; July 15, 2013 at 7:03 PM
Unknown said...: Then what happened? Come on now, enquiring minds want to know!; July 16, 2013 at 8:22 AM
G-Man said...: Izzy Bella...

You are so wonderfully creative.; July 16, 2013 at 8:49 AM
Lyn said...: That's how we live and learn..going where we shouldn't!!; July 16, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Unknown said...: Ouch! Very effective.; July 17, 2013 at 4:07 AM
gautami tripathy said...: Hot, hot, hot!!

in the shadows, let it be; July 19, 2013 at 10:41 AM