Friday, September 9, 2011

Flash Fiction 55: Up High on Bumble Bee Street

Hazy and hot enough that
inside your skin matches the air on it.
Two people walking ahead of me
this morning are tall, tan and
slim. They could have been drawn
by sand and pastels-that is how
grainy and soft the weather is.
Their calm easy steps belie
my excitement and anticipation of the beach!


Brian Miller said...

nice...i would def be all about going to the beach...i miss it...used to live near it...have fun

G-Man said...

Last Saturday it was 95, on Monday high of 62!
The beach would have been so refreshing!
But your description of the heat was Right On
Loved your 55 Izzy.
Can I tell you something? I really appreciate you playing again on Friday. I'm honored that you find the time to visit, and support me.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...Galen

Alice Audrey said...

Calm and exciting by turns. This is fun.

hedgewitch said...

You've captured all kinds of images and sensations in your 55. Enjoyed it much.

Morning said...

handsome jam of words
with a romantic imagery.
beautiful 55.
Thanks for sharing.

avoid the clap said...

Bumble Bee Street sounds like the place to be. Buzzing with excitement.

gautami tripathy said...

I liked the captured sounds in it...

noting it all down

Kat W said...

Love the way you've described the weather through a picture of pastels and sand!

I followed your comment on this week's IA pattern theme post & just wanted to say how I liked your profile blurb.

Kat :-)

hope said...

You've made my hot and humid reality much nicer today. :)

Lydia said...

Oh, do you even know how beautifully you described the couple?! That is a gorgeous 55.
(Obviously, I am late in reading FFs.)