Monday, February 14, 2011

Microfiction Monday, 2/14/11



"I have had about enough of this lounging
listening to silly love poems and maybe sipping wine!
I am going down to investigate that river "

18 comments:

indicaspecies said...

Yea, he is more of the exploring kind rather than being a romantic...

Good one, and have a lovely day.

Brian Miller said...

smiles. invite her along it can still be romantic...

Diane said...

Better to seek out his own adventure then sit there, I agree! :O)

Peggy said...

He's a doer. They get bored easily.
It would be better to include his date on his walk though! Nice.

jabblog said...

It's not much fun being a gooseberry, is it? LOL!

Sylvia K said...

No romance for this guy -- he's ready for adventure! He might be surprised how adventurous a romance can be!!

Sylvia

Scott said...

spoken like a man would speak lol

Although, the river can be romantic as well :-)

Susan Fobes said...

He might want to think twice-it looks like quite a drop...

sylviamorice said...

I think he may be over-compensating for not having a girlfriend with him at this picnic...hope he finds gold in the river!

Lisa Ricard Claro said...

Hmmm...wine sounds pretty good to me! LOL

Jinksy said...

The pragmatic approach... :)

Madeleine said...

Glad he made up his mind LOL! :O)

Michael G-G said...

He's a doer, not a thinker!

Loved this one. Have a great week.

Ruthi said...

I can't blame you. I want adventure too.

RUTHI

Jim said...

His girl turned him off, and away!
Nice one, Izzy. You are very clever.
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L.L. Barkat said...

Maybe I could write a whole story if it only had to be three terrific lines like these :)

Lydia said...

I absolutely love this!

Kenia Cris said...

ahahahhaah I liked it a lot! A.D.D. potential patient! =P

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