Monday, February 21, 2011

Microfiction Monday, 2/21/11

"JOE you in here? my cell phones dead.
turns out the whole town is haunted-
My feet are killing me already;
I am going back to the bus-"

11 comments:

5thsister said...

It does appear haunted, doesn't it! Reminds me of a Ghost Hunter's episode...where's an EVP monitor when you need one?

Peggy said...

"Oh no, don't go, I'm in here,... tied up"
Very clever!

Doctor FTSE said...

The bests ghosts are the ones you never see.

Sylvia K said...

I do agree with the Doctor, the best ghosts are the ones you never see! Great take on the pic of the day! Have a wonderful week!

Sylvia

SouthLakesMom said...

Perhaps the cell phone is just SLEEPING...buwahahahaha

Very nicely done!

Jim said...

Something strange is going on here!

Dah.

Cleverly done, Izzy. :)
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G-Man said...

IzzyBella...Bueno!

Susan Fobes said...

Let's just hope she can get to the bus... Wahaha!
(Okay, I couldn't resist the evil laugh-LOL!)

sylviamorice said...

Oh no--I hope both he and Joe made it back to the bus...love the leading line...could be a great story!

KB said...

Spooky!

Pat said...

Poor Ms Fairy is in a quandary--no Joe, no shoes, ghosts--argghh! She should wave her fairy wand and make it all better. Very creative story!