Friday, August 19, 2011

Flash Fiction 55: Whoosh-

Imagine a wide and wonderful heart,
that's roughly the shape of Lake Luna inside its preserve.
A dirt road looped around, coming in from Bent Fork
and exiting onto Wild and Woolly.
The park was perched above the Palisades, which are long, craggy and steep.
They say, Grandma Warren spent quite a bit of time there.

11 comments:

Nara Malone said...

I can see this beautiful spot through your words. I'd like to spend a lot of time there too.

Brian Miller said...

i think i would as well..sounds lovely...

Alice Audrey said...

Sounds like my kind of place.

Martin H. said...

Just the place to start a dream.

G-Man said...

Pallisades Park?
Freddy "Boom Boom" Cannon?
Izzy My Friend...Thanks
Finally got you to return to the 55 Fold for at least one week!
You are a fantastic writer, and thank you so much for playing today.
Have a Kick Ass Week-End

Daydreamertoo said...

It sounds as if you are describing what I would consider, a little piece of Heaven. Lovely 55

gautami tripathy said...

I loved your description!

a mute question

Enchanted Oak said...

I was wondering if the "Whoosh" headline had anything to do with that sense of time falling away when we realize how human are the people who helped make us what we are....

Mama Zen said...

Sounds wonderful!

TALON said...

What a wonderful way to describe a special place!

Lydia said...

I love the names you used here.
I want to know more about Grandma Warren!