He came on the cabin one day, when he was out with his camera .
Stepped onto bare wooden floor, from the porch.
opened one door off the empty kitchen- and found the full length mirror.
He was startled by the damage he had done to his left eye-This was how
other people would see him- and it was horrible.
"I must get an eye patch- and soon!"
Then he snapped a picture for sketching purposes; and left.
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Clever. Damnably clever! Like it a lot.
"Hell is the other people..."
It feels like an extract from a book I'd like to read. <3
nice...intriguing...would def loveto see this expanded upon...a patchwould be pretty cool though...
ooo I like the idea of the mirror
quirky = good
nice take!
JJRod'z
Clever intrigue shared well. Could be expanded into more of a story... sharing a bit of the patched eye.
A vignette to set us wondering...
Next, we'll fit him with a peg leg!!!
Intrigue! Nothing like a mirror.
You make it sound like this really happened.
Excellent perspective--very creative!
This is clever and fun! :-)
I really didn't notice his eye .... since it's a self portrait, I wonder what AW was trying to convey? Your Magpie is wonderful.
clever..
Hohoho,
What charming poetry you have posted here.
Invite you to share 1 to 3 poems with us, anything could fit the theme of object,
Cheers.
Hope to see you in.
Happy Writing..
xoxox
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