Friday, January 20, 2012

FF55 1/20/12 "Drifting"

" Beware" She says, " Of complacency-"
and waves her long slim hand." I was drifting
off into Family Land; two lovely girls growing up-"
   At 8:19  My attention was sliding and gliding on sleepy ski's.
Her long silver earrings twisted and shone against dark bright hair.
 Those cars on the highway- no signals when changing lanes.

9 comments:

G-Man said...

I got pulled over in West Virginia for changing lanes without flashing the blinker.
I'll never do it again.
I really liked your 55 Izzy
I think that there is much more to this story than meets the eye!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

G-Man said...

Have we ever played...EUCHRE!!!???

Alice Audrey said...

Lot of depth here. The first time I read through I saw an impending accident. The second time a change in lifestyle.

Brian Miller said...

oo you make us think a bit today...smiles....beware complacency...and then changing (lanes) with no warning play well off each other...

Brian Miller said...

sure enough, you can have a copy...smiles.

hedgewitch said...

Like that the implications are not spelled out, makes it seem more real, somehow--life never spells anything out for us. Enjoyed it.

TALON said...

This gave me chills, izzy...my imagination is filling in scary details.

Margaret said...

...unsettling, for sure.

ScottF said...

i love the imagery here, and the spirals/lane changes... beautiful piece