Sunday, January 8, 2012

D'verse . Sunday Morning

"Ploof------------ ploof, "
Steps on dusty stairs

sll-oof,  sch-----looff :
corncob broom

sliding hay and chaff
from wooden loft, onto ground.

Pluuufff ----whufff,
manure fork cuts through dust
to lift it up.

"Droo-ook----- schruuuc-kkk, "
hay bits glide
short ride on metal,

to the manure pile!

12 comments:

Claudia said...

oh nice..this reminded me of the summers when i used to help on my uncle's farm with the hay...loved it..great capture...can smell the hay...honestly..

Sub-Radar-Mike said...

Gotta love the clever onomatopoeia!

Isabel said...

reminded me of time spent at the stables long ago. wonderful.

Bodhirose said...

Have no experience with barns, manure, hay, stables but loved this illustration!

Brian Miller said...

ok, i swear i commented on this...great capture of sound in this...taking an ordinary moment and bringing it alive...

i approved you comment at dverse...first time commenters or those that have not in a while hit the spam filter...but i got you...smiles.

zongrik said...

i love the manure in the dust

bumble bee

kez said...

yep can almost smell the scene ...thank you for the smiles x x

Sheila Moore said...

love this! so many sounds in even the simplest (and dirtiest) of chores.

Mama Zen said...

Great job!

JJ Roa Rodriguez said...

you made it sound cute... love it!

JJRod'z

G-Man said...

Top Notch Bucolic Poetry!!!

art2cee2 said...

Love your descriptive sounds...Ah the barn life! :-)