Friday, February 24, 2012

FF 55 2/24/12 Yesterday

Following a wailing freight train
twining with the grey and silver clouds
slicing under blue.

Landing for an hour to visit
a friend I feared derailed,
only to find cold fresh water and apples waiting.

Onto a dark chair of dental misery
then bursting skyward toward comfort
of a customers garden,

slowly unfurling toward spring.

8 comments:

Brian Miller said...

i hope you get your spring...i was completely derailed at dental misery...my teeth lamented for you...smiles.

Jinksy said...

Derailed sounds dodgy... :)

Yvonne Osborne said...

I love, "to find freah water and apples waiting." Very vivid imagery. Spring is coming. Actually, we've not yet had our winter.

Cheers!

G-Man said...

Izzy...
What a whirlwind day!
It's won't be long now, although we got dumped on pretty good last night.
Loved your 55
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Alice Audrey said...

Sounds like a hectic schedule.

hedgewitch said...

I'll take the garden anyday. Loved the twists and images in this one.

Mama Zen said...

You have my sympathy on the dental misery!

Marita Abraham said...

Oh the images in your poem are amazing!