Friday, January 25, 2013

FF55, 1/25/13, Visability

"Dismantle this! " Death swiped his scythe-
Spirit fled from the body prone.

"You have made my job so easy!"
Death sneered at the shivering spirit

"That wall between east and west Devano-
when restored- you dismantled it.!

All those stacks of laws and policies-repealed!
Anarchy is a bright and shining light for me- Begone!"




                                  I have been reading about 'Symbolism' all week.
I  tripped over cold air and been leveled by wind...Intellectualism sneered at me
 from the page yesterday and an Anarchist was shaking his blocky fist
 at me this morning. So-here's to it!



7 comments:

G-Man said...

Izzy...?
Getting more and more philosophical these days. This one sure made you think.
Loved your Symbolic 55
Thanks for playing, thanks for this very intellectual story, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

G-Man said...

OK...One more thing.

BINGO!!!!

Other Mary said...

Ah, interesting 55. I like the opening lines, 'Death swiped his scythe-/ Spirit fled from the body prone.' Great image here.

Susan said...

I agree with Mary. I also like your use of alliteration with the sssss sound. This would sound great at a reading.

Happy 55 Friday!

Lydia said...

I loved this in-your-face poem. It was dangerously fascinating, izzy!

Yvonne Osborne said...

I like the opening lines. There is indeed much symbolism in a scythe.

Brian Miller said...

ha...nice....anarchy never lasts...i talk with my gov students about this...there are a few self proclaimed anarchist...someone always gains the power...and then power always corrupts...