" Perhaps he'd hoped
so they all crowded
onward to-
At last he found
The beauty was
Upheld
Not for sale sadly,
Could you expect
Really
Another was possibly they inquired
at the beach but Mother said
"Adieu"
Afterwards Sally called to add-
Mystery you know it was!
The bus was late If only
the weather -"
The challenge was to write about hearing parts of a conversation.
Not a breathless rush, but continuous! Hope you can piece
the puzzle together roughly! ( travel +weekend+house+ family )
10 comments:
Love that, izzy, because that is how conversation really is. You captured it brilliantly. :) Lovely to be back reading your works!
IZZY!!!!
Becoming a mystery writer I see.
But thats OK, I love a challenge
Loved your enigmatic 55
I can see you smiling as you were typing this.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Very intriguing! This is quite a unique angle on spoken word.
I caught the travel, but the breaks add mystery too.
Very interesting and well written.
interesting...def hearing only parts of the conversation we fill in our words and ideas to get a clear picture...i wonder if it is anywhere near right though...ha
What you can fill in of a conversation.. much like good writing where there are open pieces to add yourself.. all stories become different.. which has a purpose I thinkg
I'm impressed with the story you told in so few words.
Really nicely captured bits of conversation. Just enough to whet the reader's appetite for more!
You did a very good job overcoming your challenges.
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