Friday, March 14, 2014

FF55 3/14/14 From Around a Corner



    " Perhaps      he'd hoped
 so they all crowded  
 onward to-      

At last      he found  
The beauty was
Upheld

Not for sale     sadly,
Could you expect
Really

Another was possibly     they inquired
at the beach    but Mother said
"Adieu"

Afterwards Sally called       to add-
Mystery      you know it was!

The bus was late      If only
 the weather -"


                                    The challenge was to write about hearing parts of a conversation.
                             Not a breathless rush, but continuous!  Hope you can piece
                            the puzzle together roughly!          ( travel +weekend+house+ family )

10 comments:

TALON said...

Love that, izzy, because that is how conversation really is. You captured it brilliantly. :) Lovely to be back reading your works!

G-Man said...

IZZY!!!!
Becoming a mystery writer I see.
But thats OK, I love a challenge
Loved your enigmatic 55
I can see you smiling as you were typing this.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Kerry O'Connor said...

Very intriguing! This is quite a unique angle on spoken word.

Alice Audrey said...

I caught the travel, but the breaks add mystery too.

Lady Lilith said...

Very interesting and well written.

Brian Miller said...

interesting...def hearing only parts of the conversation we fill in our words and ideas to get a clear picture...i wonder if it is anywhere near right though...ha

Björn said...

What you can fill in of a conversation.. much like good writing where there are open pieces to add yourself.. all stories become different.. which has a purpose I thinkg

Mary said...

I'm impressed with the story you told in so few words.

Mary said...

Really nicely captured bits of conversation. Just enough to whet the reader's appetite for more!

Lady Lilith said...

You did a very good job overcoming your challenges.