Friday, October 8, 2010

Flash fiction 55 10/8/10

It used to be
a red and yellow suitcase
carryied my important life inside,

Then a neon orange back pack
complete with sleeping bag
and pocket knife.                 

For a while a car
with an air mattress
and tent rolled up inside,

Now a camper shades
our driveway
with a kayak by its side. 


Brian Miller said...

interesting how the things we carry changes over the years...i would take a kayak anyday...although a tents not too bad either...smiles. nice 55.

Eric Alder said...

I liked the over-the-years progression. Nice 55, izzy!

G-Man said...

You'll end up like my wife...
Her idea of roughing it is the Motel-6
Loved your 55..
Very clever, and very cool.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Mama Zen said...

Stuff. It gets us all eventually!

Jinksy said...

Clever! A lot said in a few words. :)

Jingle said...

smart 55.