Monday, October 25, 2010

Microfiction Monday

 
 
 



Will he ever come? Susan had enjoyed swimming and food;
now she just wanted to get to away from Buddy
and back to town for the Chess match.

17 comments:

Diane said...

I guess only Susan is thinking about chess..... :O)

Dave King said...

I like that, both for what it tells and what it doesn't.

alessandra said...

Poor girl, I so understand her ;)

hope said...

A girl can't even eat and run without an accomplice. :)

Sylvia K said...

Oh, yes! Understand right where she's coming from! Great take on the pic of the day! Hope you have a lovely week!

Sylvia

Fay's Too said...

Perfect!

Pat said...

So much in so few words! I can identify with wanting to escape from a banal conversation! Whos is "he"? I want the rest of the story. Excellent MM!

septembermom said...

I'm intrigued too! Great job :)

5thsister said...

She does appear to be awaiting for her great escape. A unique take on this week's photo.

Kay L. Davies said...

Yes, intriguing. Very.

Kay, Alberta

sylviamorice said...

I'm surprised that she doesn't want to play 'chest' instead, with all those hunky men around her! LOL.
Have a great week ahead. Cheers!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Nice how you were able to have Susan as part of the MfM.

Mama Zen said...

Intriguing!

Smitty said...

She is your alter ego?

Susan at Stony River said...

I think I know which one is Susan LOL -- and oh boy, I've known that will-he-ever-come feeling!

Jingle said...

few words,
powerful meaning.

Jingle said...

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