Friday, December 17, 2010

Flash fiction 55 12/17/10

Sometimes we get to help
free a prisoner
who did not know
she was being held-

From a darkish basement
hidden behind curtains,
in her daughters house.

Bring her and her little dog
to a place,
with her own kitchen and bath

her own closet,
tables and chairs-
light pouring in
and friends reaching out.


Brian Miller said...

sounds like a great redemption story...and how easy not to realise you are the one trapped...

hedgewitch said...

Eerie, but comforting. I can identify, or should I say, I would like to identify with both the rescued and the kind rescuer...

Monkey Man said...

Would love to hear the prompt behind this one. Very nice.

TALON said...

This makes me wonder of the inspiration. What a gift that is...freedom. We so often take it completely for granted.

Jingle said...

that's lovely 55.
it is cool to have you showcase such.

G-Man said...

Is this a true story?
Wow Izzy!!!
Most Excellent 55 Young Lady!
Thanks for playing, thanks for your support, and have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

Claudia said...

wonder if this was a story you read in the newspaper or really know this person - tragical but most excellent 55