"Ploof------------ ploof, "
Steps on dusty stairs
sll-oof, sch-----looff :
corncob broom
sliding hay and chaff
from wooden loft, onto ground.
Pluuufff ----whufff,
manure fork cuts through dust
to lift it up.
"Droo-ook----- schruuuc-kkk, "
hay bits glide
short ride on metal,
to the manure pile!
Steps on dusty stairs
sll-oof, sch-----looff :
corncob broom
sliding hay and chaff
from wooden loft, onto ground.
Pluuufff ----whufff,
manure fork cuts through dust
to lift it up.
"Droo-ook----- schruuuc-kkk, "
hay bits glide
short ride on metal,
to the manure pile!
11 comments:
oh nice..this reminded me of the summers when i used to help on my uncle's farm with the hay...loved it..great capture...can smell the hay...honestly..
Gotta love the clever onomatopoeia!
reminded me of time spent at the stables long ago. wonderful.
Have no experience with barns, manure, hay, stables but loved this illustration!
ok, i swear i commented on this...great capture of sound in this...taking an ordinary moment and bringing it alive...
i approved you comment at dverse...first time commenters or those that have not in a while hit the spam filter...but i got you...smiles.
i love the manure in the dust
bumble bee
yep can almost smell the scene ...thank you for the smiles x x
love this! so many sounds in even the simplest (and dirtiest) of chores.
you made it sound cute... love it!
JJRod'z
Top Notch Bucolic Poetry!!!
Love your descriptive sounds...Ah the barn life! :-)
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