You woke up knowing
the dream was correct
"How the earth moves and works".
"No matter what you do, with a wrench,
pry bar, hammer- you cannot change truth!
No matter what you try- you cannot alter time."
It is as slow as it goes, with dread
or as fast as it flows with your joy.
So own every dream, thought,
word and action.
For all is all woven into
and recorded by the skies;
and ground, buried underneath,
in the finely heated halls of time.
14 comments:
Lovely, Izzy. I especially like the ending.
def an enchanting write...and yeah we cant force it to our will...though we try most certainly...
First 3 lines captured my imagination. Throughout history, answers/truths have come to mankind in dreams. And now I believe that as being quite probably TRUE!--grin! Probably???
I really like "finely heated halls of time"...
I like the "woven into and recorded by the skies". I like your use of quotation marks too.
... so wise.
This is wonderful and wise. Great advice! Stanza 3 is great, as is the last line.
I like the message you have in here.
Profound, izzy. And the final stanza is like music to me.
You never spoke a truer word... 'Cept the heated halls could do with a thermostat occasionally...
boy if everyone owned every dream, thought, word and action, crazy how honesty would change the world. Love this, it really speaks loud and clear
this tells me to live one day at a time...
nice, thanks Izzy
Izzy....
What a wonderfully insightful piece of work.
How lovely this piece -
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