Thanks go out to last weeks challenge, D'verse: An Erasure poem.
I had fun! I did not link. (I would choose to rearrange the layout on this but I resisted.)
Taken from the first page of chapter:" Turning the Soil".(Page 13)
From: The Wild Braid, Stanley Kunitz, w/ Genine Lentine .
WW Norton & Co. c.2003.
Cultivating
life
of a world
experience,
that depended on
interplay of forces;
in turn, responded to my touch, my presence.
Praise it leads
between the self and
the single flower
harmony among all aspects of
domestication taking
the wild, elements that shine
holds infinite possibilities. What sense
its kingdom to convey? It represents
beautiful.
I had fun! I did not link. (I would choose to rearrange the layout on this but I resisted.)
Taken from the first page of chapter:" Turning the Soil".(Page 13)
From: The Wild Braid, Stanley Kunitz, w/ Genine Lentine .
WW Norton & Co. c.2003.
Cultivating
life
of a world
experience,
that depended on
interplay of forces;
in turn, responded to my touch, my presence.
Praise it leads
between the self and
the single flower
harmony among all aspects of
domestication taking
the wild, elements that shine
holds infinite possibilities. What sense
its kingdom to convey? It represents
beautiful.
4 comments:
Pretty good job of erasing words.
Praise it leads
between the self and
the single flower...nice...and elements that shine hold infinite possibilities....ha i love that bit as well....really cool response...
you should drop this in the linky for OLN going on now...
I like the concluding line...beautiful is the nature ~
This is a good technique though I haven't tried it yet ~
Have a good week ~
In "erase" poetry, as in life, I must learn what to delete...and what to not. Never easy choice.
Actually, the ghost of what was lived--or written--remains NMW.
Nice work, Izzy, and fun, too?
Steve
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