Compact and thoughtful. Especially like the last stanza.
I also love the visual of blending to 'we.'
I think you should develop this into something more substantial. It stands alone but only just. Interesting take.
Izzy, I like "short" and actually, it is fun to "fill in" the blanks--maybe just me. NO!I also liked your "one and one makes one..." Unlike our program, where 1+1=3 Right?--grin!You are certainly a faithful follower. Thank you.Was this a "One Shot"???
Compact, simple, less is more sometimes.Dreamy.Likes it!
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Compact and thoughtful. Especially like the last stanza.
I also love the visual of blending to 'we.'
I think you should develop this into something more substantial. It stands alone but only just. Interesting take.
Izzy, I like "short" and actually, it is fun to "fill in" the blanks--maybe just me. NO!
I also liked your "one and one makes one..." Unlike our program, where 1+1=3 Right?--grin!
You are certainly a faithful follower. Thank you.
Was this a "One Shot"???
Compact, simple, less is more sometimes.Dreamy.Likes it!
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