Cool - love the imagery.
setting the scene for mystery? nice!
remind me not to accept invitations for a meal!nice one!
Hmm, this does not bode well...fantastic suspense!
So few words but great image and mystery! (by the way: It wasn't Col. Mustard!)
Dirty work at the crossroads? LOL
I hope you didn't miss....!!
Clever take on the prompt!~laurie
Conjures up a gruesome picture. Good one!
Chills!!!!! Very well done.. :)Hugs x
A little of the macabre. I like it.
Hmmm, you got right in there Izzy, full of tension!
Other than that...how did you like the dinner? Clever...and the beginning of a mystery. Vb
Terrific - chilling and mysterious!
A bit of mysterious de...light in dish one. Nicely done
Yes! A mystery is born!Anna :o]
It was Professor Plum in the dining room with a knife!
This might be a dinner invitation I would choose to refuse ....
Eery! I can see the spatters and the outline of the knife! Delicious tension!
Well-set, focused work. Exemplary.
Brrr! Loved the imagery :)My Magpie Post
a wonderful mystery in poetic verse, how chilling,nice write,joanny
So terse and tense. You set a good scene with the barest of words. Good work!
you write beautiful poetry, keep it up.Invite you to share your poetry with our poetry potluck today,Random poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!Hope to see you in.Bless your talent.Cheers.xxx
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