Strong poem - really like your style!
Perfect. I love to watch them join forces on the car windows.
I like the way drops race on a windowpane...
you have struck a chord I think!
Awesome take!Insightful indeed.. Hugs xxIt's Pouring
What a cool take on the picture!
Yes yes yes. This is great. Nice Magpie!
Love this Izzy, great take on the prompt!
This really lovely!
I love the idea of raindrops quenching thirst, I used my magpie for a similar purpose.
"Stronger together" is such a creative take on the raindrops. It's really amazing to read the differences in each participant's response to the prompt.
Strength in numbers...well written. Vb
"You can draw them in upon each other" Nice.
Oh, this is nice!
I love it when I see short poetry like this that says so much without one extra word. Very good stuff.
Love the quenching moments of a slow stroll through the rain. Nicely shared.
Like this! Love watching rain making connections on the window pane, drops becoming streams and streams becoming rivers.Anna :o]
coalescing drops!Here is mine:misty dew
very nice ...and different :)
There's a nice metaphor in this one.Poetry24…where news is the Muse
My first reaction? The same as Martin!!! A metaphor for life.
.....pulling together....love this one Izzy! :-)
Solid, focused, thoughtful work.
quench a thirst indeed :)
Lots of drops make a glass if you're patient.(As kids we used to stick our tongues out in the rain . . )Thankfor this poem.
Mmm...lovely image of the drops pulling together. So many possibilities!
Izzy....?Pretty soon you'll be famous.Please remember us peasants OK?This was fantastic!
fabulous...Greetings,Welcome join us,Thanks for the time, a free verse is accepted,Your poetry rocks. Hope to see you inxx
Stopping by from Magpie Tales. Lovely poem.
So much said in so few words. Well done indeed.
Just like people becoming groups of friends and family.
Compact but explorational...thank you! Very nice.
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