Friday, November 12, 2010

Flash fiction 55 11/12/10

Nemali stood
her long thin limbs
short red hair flat

from her brothers aim
a bucketful,
 sticky and stiff with
rank aggression
of spiritual pride


Brian Miller said...

oh yeah...trembling for th elittle twist in the second stanza...24 words?

Eric Alder said...

Nothing worse than being dowsed with a bucketful for sticky spiritual pride. (I think?)

Interesting 55, Izzy!

G-Man said...

What was this about?
Tell me please?
I loved the flow, and I'm sure it's perfect.
But I need to know.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

Jingle said...

wow, powerful imagery.