something about those leaves ~ magnetic draw ~ your write evokes the crispy crunch of going through with that 'drat, drst, drat' like popping those cellophane wraps ~ so satifying ~ great take ~ Lib
She sounds like she needs to be carried on someone's shoulders. Aww.
"made an echo"! What a wonderful idea.-- KayKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Great take on the pic of the day! I, too, like the idea of the "crunch of leaves making an echo"! Hope you have a wonderful week!Sylvia
At least ponies leave tell-tale markers behind them ;-)
I predict Mummy will find the pony first! I like the "sound effects."
I like the way you made us feel like we were there through the imagery and sound of this microfiction. Well done :)
Sure hope she finds it! :O)
I like the addition of the pony! :)
Cute. Crunching leaves are one of the fun things of Autumn.
trsiling a pony through the leaves...dirtiest the shoes...smiles.
Those leaves would certainly make it difficult to sneak up on anything or anyone! Good MM.Have a great week. Cheers!
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/thursday-poets-rally-week-33-november-18-24/ Welcome attending poets rally week 33, link in a poem, visit 18 poets, done,Poetry awards assigned upon completion.Happy Friday!Thanks in advance for the attention!xxx
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