something about those leaves ~ magnetic draw ~ your write evokes the crispy crunch of going through with that 'drat, drst, drat' like popping those cellophane wraps ~ so satifying ~ great take ~ Lib
She sounds like she needs to be carried on someone's shoulders. Aww.
"made an echo"! What a wonderful idea.-- KayKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Great take on the pic of the day! I, too, like the idea of the "crunch of leaves making an echo"! Hope you have a wonderful week!Sylvia
At least ponies leave tell-tale markers behind them ;-)
I predict Mummy will find the pony first! I like the "sound effects."
I like the way you made us feel like we were there through the imagery and sound of this microfiction. Well done :)
Sure hope she finds it! :O)
I like the addition of the pony! :)
Cute. Crunching leaves are one of the fun things of Autumn.
Impressive.
trsiling a pony through the leaves...dirtiest the shoes...smiles.
smartly put.
Those leaves would certainly make it difficult to sneak up on anything or anyone! Good MM.Have a great week. Cheers!
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something about those leaves ~ magnetic draw ~ your write evokes the crispy crunch of going through with that 'drat, drst, drat' like popping those cellophane wraps ~ so satifying ~ great take ~ Lib
She sounds like she needs to be carried on someone's shoulders. Aww.
"made an echo"! What a wonderful idea.
-- Kay
Kay, Alberta, Canada
An Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel
Great take on the pic of the day! I, too, like the idea of the "crunch of leaves making an echo"! Hope you have a wonderful week!
Sylvia
At least ponies leave tell-tale markers behind them ;-)
I predict Mummy will find the pony first! I like the "sound effects."
I like the way you made us feel like we were there through the imagery and sound of this microfiction. Well done :)
Sure hope she finds it! :O)
I like the addition of the pony! :)
Cute. Crunching leaves are one of the fun things of Autumn.
Impressive.
trsiling a pony through the leaves...dirtiest the shoes...smiles.
smartly put.
Those leaves would certainly make it difficult to sneak up on anything or anyone! Good MM.
Have a great week. Cheers!
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