Friday, November 5, 2010

Flash Fiction 55, corner left from Bus ticket-10/5/10

Drinking water
from bending leaves
a coil and course
of throaty songs,  

tucked and folded
cool and long,
 passing over
wrapping 'round,

hammering silver
out and down
to find more voice in sea.

6 comments:

Brian Miller said...

interesting...some cool things here...drinking from a leaf...nice....that second stanza has some wicked flow...it seems random though in light of the title...fun though

Eric Alder said...

I can follow that one all the way to the sea... nice 55, Izzy!

Claudia said...

drinking water from bending leaves...that rocks!
my 55 is here

G-Man said...

This has such a beautiful flow Izzy.
Most excellent 55 my friend.
This is why I love my job...:-)
Thanks for playing Today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

Jingle said...

that's beautiful 55.
you make nature alive.
timeless imagery.

Monkey Man said...

Stopping by from your comment on my Sunday 160. This is a great 55. Give the Sunday 160 a try sometime. Love to see you there.