Monday, November 29, 2010

Microfiction Monday, 11/29/10

Stop King! go no further.
See all the huge horns ?
They only behave for her
because she knows what happens,
before what happens, happens -

14 comments:

SparkleFarkel said...

(eerily-->) OooooOooOoo! How fitting that I hear The Twilight Zone theme song playing in my head as I take in your microfiction!

This was truly a fun read!

SparkleFarkle~~~~~*

Peggy said...

Good one, we all know what happens when what happens happens...and it's not a good thing!

Jinksy said...

The imagination boggles... Ouch!

Charlene Amsden said...

I think your story and my story could go together to form a larger picture. Nicely done!

Scott M. Frey said...

ok, now that's just tricky lol not gonna mess with that lady!

Sylvia K said...

That's right, don't mess with the lady/broad -- whichever name fits the best! Have a great week!

Sylvia

SouthLakesMom said...

What a pointed reminder! ha ha

I crack myself up too...

Pat said...

Oh, I like it! Suspense and drama--excellent!

Dominic de Mattos said...

I feel drawn into a web of meaning - well done!

:Dom

hope said...

What happens in the kingdom may not stay in the kingdom, huh?

Good one!

Anonymous said...

I like this!

Michael G-G said...

Wow! This is quite a story. How's it end? Oh, I guess only she knows...

Have a great week, and thanks for stopping by on my one.

Diane said...

The bull whisperer strikes again! :O)

Pooch said...

And THAT is how it happened!! Inventive idea!

:)