Saturday, March 12, 2011

Poetry Bus, 3/12/11

Thanks to WATERCATS for stretching brains.
I am not sure I met all the criteria, but I got
 -4 line protest, seven beats, 2+2 end rhymes.

A horse tied to a huge tire
no food, no water, heat like fire
I went home and got some money
went right back, it was not funny-

10 comments:

Batteson.Ind said...

Any poem mentioning horses is great in my opinion! cheers for riding ;-)

Peter Goulding said...

There's a definite horse theme in your recent stuff Izzy!

Helen said...

I live in Central Oregon's horse country ... this is such a relevant protest poem ... great!!

Nicholas said...

Hahaha!!!

Lolamouse said...

Great protest poem! Thanks for visiting my blog!

Titus said...

Oh, that was a protest that moved me.

Louise said...

Cool Izzy and you got the beat perfect!

Enchanted Oak said...

People who do such things should have such things done to them.

G-Man said...

Izzy Belle...
Very nicely done!

Totalfeckineejit said...

Nice one Izzy!