I come home to find
A "push me- pull you-"
Do it behind my back !?
Don't you dare.
Be direct and stand square.
Even if you don't stay long.
You can whisper I don't care.
I can pinch, grab an ear-
yank you, shake you
'til sense rolls down;
clear your head and try again.
11 comments:
don't rattle too hard or sense may be shaken out for good.
you give me smiles.
it is not the theme, but the word play make its way here.
have a beautiful time in your yard.
loved your 55.
You can pull someones ears till they make sense?
I'll have to try that!
Couldn't resist the lure of the 55 could you?
hahahahahaha
You Rock...
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
Child-wild urge piece. Effective work.
I enjoyed this poem, but was uncertain of the context surrounding it. You were right about Spring break and kids -- not being a "break" in the usual sense. Basically, it was a break from routine and a week of spontaneous fun..."Just go with it, Mom!" Pretty much was the theme.
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Well, I prefer a direct confrontation myself, but I suppose not everyone does.
I like this, nice and snappy.
Love hurts...well it does, damn it
Peace, hp
If only a good pinch and shake could fix things. And there they are again, those terrible, useless words, "if only."
Nice one.
I prefer direct!
Here is mine:
homing
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