(Argument between self and Higher Power )
Here it is- Ample warmth and blue skies.
Can we translate some of this, into ample coinage Please ?
Here: Creative and pleasant freedom-
I've opened windows and doors...
Good friends, family.
I do appreciate them thank you-
Health and energy-
Wonderful, wonderful-
Peace and opportunity...
I am passing on as much as possible; -may I ask you something ?
Intelligence- time,learning-
Very helpful, Please-
Patience, forgiveness-
Yes- Creator ?
Honesty, willingness-
Please stop, a second or two !
Compassion, love-
Indeed, I am so glad, HOW do I-
Generosity, kindness-
So-you cannot listen-?
There, that will get you started...
Too much raw material.
I'll be around-
*SIGH* -Love, laughter-
You too!
13 comments:
I knew God had a sense of humour. Eloquently put!
Enjoyed this. Thanks.
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I'm glad Dana listed you last. It helped me end my readings on a high note! I love the image of God as being patient and a little amused by our stumbling around trying to figure Him out.
Well done!
You started me off with a smile ... and ended me with a sigh! Beautifully written.
Too much raw material.
Impossible! LOL :)
I like the image of you trotting after the Big Guy trying to get a word in edgewise. I'm curious what question you would ask if you could, that starts out: HOW do I...?
Clever and very enjoyable.
You reinforce my lifelong belief that God is not a good listener . . to put it mildly.
I love this! Although in my prayer life the opposite happens - I don't shut up long enough to hear the answers :)
Yes, what was the end of the 'How do I..' question ?
Great mono/dialogue!I likes it!
God is a good listener - we just pose the wrong questions. Lovely poem!
Is there a higher power than the self? I've no evidence. I don't believe on fairies either. Or Father Christmas. Nice poem, though.
Talking to oneself often gets better answers...
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