Friday, January 21, 2011

Flash fiction 55 1/20/11

I was reading a book this morning
Devotion, by Dani Shapiro.
 (p. 17) stories, energy.
Then I saw G-mans bikes-


'Samskara' knots of energy
in hips, heart, jaw, lungs;
are stories held within,

I see nuggets
of white and striped colors
large marbles with uneven layers
Unmeltable, uncrackable.

Then the stories unrolling
as we try on wheels,
attached to out feet

skates-then bigger
wheels of tricycles,
bicycles onto Ferris wheels,
   
what are their stories like?




6 comments:

Brian Miller said...

nice...like your transitions from marbles to wheels to ferris wheels...like our evolution...each carrying a memory or two...

moondustwriter said...

Love the feeling of inertia. Many wonderful stories to be sure

G-Man said...

Izzy...
Your story was quite insightful.
I really liked it a lot!!
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

kavisionz said...

Oh...nice!! Loved the images you created!! And totally enjoyed the way the evolution happened... A fantastic write!!

Jingle Poetry said...

lovely wonders..
beautiful 55.

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