Monday, January 24, 2011

Microfiction Monday 1/24/11

"Sorry to bring you out in this weather-
Watch the water under the the railroad bridge;
and tell me what you see--There!!-what is that??"

19 comments:

gaelikaa said...

Horrible weather, isn't it?

Strummed Words said...

Something therein swims!

Brian Miller said...

oh this is rather ominous...has old nessy returned?

Peggy said...

Was always afraid of something being in the Lake while I was swimming.
I think I'll stick with the pool!

jabblog said...

What indeed? Could be very frightening . . .

Sylvia K said...

Mmmmm looks just like Seattle! Always looks like there's something mysterious in the fog! I like it!! Hope you have a great week!

Sylvia

Suz said...

Oh I would love to have a look!
nice one

Pat said...

Now I want to know what that mysterious thing is!

Nessa said...

I'm afraid to look. No, i need to know. Aw, geez.

sylviamorice said...

Oh--tell me what they see! I want to know...really! Is it a mermaid? A sunken treasure ship? A troll?
Great mm this week. Cheers~

Diane said...

Great lead in! Wish we knew what happens next!!! :O)

Elizabeth Mueller said...

Ooh, I see it! It's a flying saucer! No, wait... it's, it's... oh no. It's me, but in 50 years!
;)

Love this! Thanks for participating.

♥.•*¨ Elizabeth ¨*•.♥

Michael G-G said...

Perhaps it's Susan's bubbling UFO? Nice one, izzy. You've got us thinking.

Have a great week.

Karen said...

Now I want to know what it is?? :> Fun!

Jim said...

Of course, real clever, Izzy! :)

Puts you on the spot, doesn't it, when someone says, "There! Did you see it?"
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Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Nicely done Izzy, Trains do sound different in the Fog.

Susan Fobes said...

I'm thinking I would have taken off by then-LOL!

Jim said...

Hey Izzy, you have received some very nice ideas since I left earlier. This one has the link to my µ-fiction Monday.
Jim's µ-fiction Monday

You were at my Photo and Poem Place. I do thank you for peeking in there and for your nice comment.
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KB said...

Sooky stuff.