I especially like that closing line!
This has a ring of the 60s about it. Nice.
very musical: )
I love the feeling of whimsy!
they're peeling off the pageThat's just what the notes do - as music! (sorry - my crap typing made the first attempt nonsense!)
A beautiful and lyrical Magpie!!!
Lovely poem with wonderful imagery. I'm happy to tell you that your contribution to last week's Wednesday's Ten picture prompt was our winning post. Thank you for sharing. Here is a link to the winning announcement: http://writewithpictures.blogspot.com/2011/01/wednesdays-ten.html
oh this was lovelyI too loved the snowflake line
live and witty magpie...love the imagery of snowflakes in your hair being covered with flowers.
Neat and lyrical
Oooohh... what a lovely image this created!! It had a bubbly and romantic feel to it... Really loved that last line... a very sweet take on the Magpie!!
Love that last line... sweet images stir from the music of your words.
Sweet. Now I am seeing flower petals and snowflakes as music notes!
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