The perfection of connection
flows
with strength and stretch,
the beauty of an arch
or lift completes
our reach and touch
before letting go.
Effort from each
enhances us,
expands encourages
creates before the tumble
roll or turning,
brings us on
to discovery...
14 comments:
I like your poem that is inspired by the obscure prompt this week. Connection and touch.
nice...this has a wonderful flow to it that complements the image well...
I love the sound of this poem-- the speaking of it aloud sounds like stretching... touching... connecting. Lovely.
Cool! Lots of movement in this One Shot, Izzy!
Wonderful start lines!
Reminds me of Greek sculptures of athletes--perfect form and function.And the last lines evoke Olympic gymnastics where physical exertion is an expression of balance and perfect execution. Nice.
"The perfection of connection
flows
with strength and stretch.." Sums it up well.
the perfection of connection...great flow in this.. i like
Love that connection.
The give and take with a rake.. Great! ..smiles..
Loving the connection you have made to the image, never ending touch.
Lovely poem..smooth flow
I loved the tumble and roll of your words!
Inherent joy to this - excellent.
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