Wednesday, January 5, 2011

One Shot Wednesday

The perfection of connection
flows
with strength and stretch,
the beauty of an arch
or lift completes
our reach and touch
before letting go.

Effort from each
enhances us,
expands encourages
creates before the tumble
roll or turning,
brings us on
to discovery...

14 comments:

Strummed Words said...

I like your poem that is inspired by the obscure prompt this week. Connection and touch.

Brian Miller said...

nice...this has a wonderful flow to it that complements the image well...

lizziviggi said...

I love the sound of this poem-- the speaking of it aloud sounds like stretching... touching... connecting. Lovely.

Eric Alder said...

Cool! Lots of movement in this One Shot, Izzy!

Titus said...

Wonderful start lines!

hedgewitch said...

Reminds me of Greek sculptures of athletes--perfect form and function.And the last lines evoke Olympic gymnastics where physical exertion is an expression of balance and perfect execution. Nice.

Martin H. said...

"The perfection of connection
flows
with strength and stretch.." Sums it up well.

Claudia said...

the perfection of connection...great flow in this.. i like

Tess Kincaid said...

Love that connection.

booguloo said...

The give and take with a rake.. Great! ..smiles..

Reflections said...

Loving the connection you have made to the image, never ending touch.

uma.a said...

Lovely poem..smooth flow

Jinksy said...

I loved the tumble and roll of your words!

Steve Isaak said...

Inherent joy to this - excellent.