Friday, January 7, 2011

Flash fiction 55 1/7/11

 A quick response to G-man's photo:

A fire in the works
where dragons lurk-beware.
stillness snakes its head around:
lips rake, in no uncertain terms
 a quake's about
to shake this ground.
Brown eyes
 claws about to gore
new gashes in your hide-
these pearls
 lay their curls
quietly around;
but there is a link
between danger and this girl-

10 comments:

Strummed Words said...

Nice. I like this one. My 55

lime said...

nicely done. i love how a single image can elicit such different responses. :)

Jingle said...

smart 55..

Hope that you have a beautiful weekend...

PattiKen said...

Very good. I love the feeling of a coiled snake about to strike.

gautami tripathy said...

Wonderful! Goes well with that photo and G-Man's 55!

Here is mine:
curtain of pebbled path

Monkey Man said...

Nice capture on the g-man's photo.

Claudia said...

indeed - danger in those brown eyes - nice one!

joanny said...

Clever gal, a nicely penned and well written poem. With or without the photo, it is quite good.

cheers,
joanny

g-man said...

Wow Izzy!!!
I'm glad to be so inspirational!
You did a fantastic job with this.
Very impressive 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

moondustwriter said...

excellent combo with the picture
wow

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