I am a crooked line,
the turn and spiral of wool
through fingers, folding onto skeins.
An edge or saturated colors
sailing along a broad horizon
Ink firmly shaping letters
for expression or signing names
Bold exacting strike of humor
rioting tension by
thunder, rolling on and on.
the turn and spiral of wool
through fingers, folding onto skeins.
An edge or saturated colors
sailing along a broad horizon
Ink firmly shaping letters
for expression or signing names
Bold exacting strike of humor
rioting tension by
thunder, rolling on and on.
9 comments:
nice blend of a lot of other crooked lines there...seems i am in good company as a crooked line...
Always good company to be found around here.
This is a delightful series of snapshots, Izzy, and not a horse in sight. The folding onto skeins line is delightful.
(ps - frimly?)
Skeins of wool make a brilliant crooked line... Are you a spinner/knitter?
'the turn and spiral of wool through fingers', is just a beautiful line, lots of crooked imagery throughout, great take on the prompt.
A beautifull collection of crooked lines ..
I like the imagery in this. "The turn and spiral of wool through fingers..." reminds me of a poem I did once about the three fates. I'll need to dust that thing off & see if it applies to any prompts in the near future.
great izzy - the whole thing seems to run together like the line it talks about, I was going to isolate the last 3 lines for praise, since they're so full of movement and music, but then the whole lot is, so it'd be wrong to split it out I think
Interesting, enticing, enigmatic. I likes!
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